Monday, October 09, 2006

lung cancer

The last weekend was the worst of all that I remember. Monday was no school so my family and me decided to go somewhere near the city. 1- We where going either to Sincelejo, Barranquilla, or Baru. Finally we went to Baru. Well, It was the nearest one and probbaly the best one for a normal holiday 2- The day seemed hot, boring and, rainy. I was enthusiastic to have a good time but nothing was well.3- We saw people arriving by foot, by car and by boat. When their is too much people it is boring because you cant dive well. 4- They were people fighting, people yelling, and other disrupting. So sometimes you like to be relax at the beach but that day was impossible. 5-Under lung cancer the surface water,I found many trash. 6- Whenever a crab bites me, I wash the cut fast. Although the cut was not so deep but it may be infected. 7- Yes, after all it was a bad day- No, it was not a lung cancer good day. 9- Although there where many friends, it was not fun. Well in conclusion I didn't have a good day. I wish not to have any more holiday similar to these. This writing make my think about also lung cancer the 31 of December of 2005, where I feel very bad and I hope it don't repeats.

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